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NaruHina High Chapter 1

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"Your daughter's progress is...disturbing. Her chakara test show that it is off the charts. Is she aware of this?"
"..."
"Hm. I thought as much. With pro-"
"She is not to be trained. Henatai will be trained instead. This matter will NOT be discussed further."
"Yes..."
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It was a beautiful day. The petite Hyugga stretched her arms. I am Hinata Hyugga. I am starting a new school today. In the middle of the year. No one will like me... I don't know what to say. The young girl slowly stepped into the building, hiding her face. She waited outside the classroom while the teacher talked about her.
"Class, today we have a new student. Her name is Hinata Hyugga, the heiress to the wealthy Hyugga company! Would you come in Hinata?"
The girl sighed and strode into the room. Still not looking up,she got very nervous. Inhaling to calm her nerves, she said," Hello. My name is Hinata Hyugga. I will thoroughly enjoy working with you."
"Why won't you show us your face?"
"She must be hideously ugly and stuck up."
A voice made her look up. "Stop that, I'm sure she's pretty."
As she looked up, she nearly had a heart attack. The person who said this Was yelling at someone else. Speechless, she looked at him. He had bright blue eyes and blond hair. She felt her cheeks getting hot. She felt dizzy like the ground was falling from under her. She felt happier than ever before. Is this love?
She was not the only one to fall in love that day. When she looked up, all the boys got a good look at her face. She had soft lavender eyes that were full of love and hope, skin like a porcelain doll and hair like the night sky. But, the didn't bet to see her for that long.
"Ahh!"
"What's wrong?"
"She suddenly collapsed!"
"Poor girl. Must be the pressure."
If you haven't figured it out,she fainted.
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Everyone calmed down and Hinata returned to class. "Hinata, now you can chose a seat. Any one that's available and that you like."
"Oh! Oh me! Me!"
"You better share her!"
" Don't sit next to them! I'll give you gifts."
"She's hot. Hey baby, come over here!"
Sighing, she looked for available seats that were not next to any of the boys who were calling her name. Glancing around, a seat next to him was available. She pointed and said quietly "Over there."
"By me, darling?"
"No, by me! Ha! I knew she liked me."
"No," said the girl close to tears, "by the blond boy."
"NARUTO?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! THAT LOSER?!!?!?!?!?!??!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! AGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!"
Hinata cringed and took her seat.
Naruto smiled." Hi! I'm Naruto Uzumaki! You probally got that from everyone shouting." Hinata was blushing like mad and nearly fainted again. Someone was touching her forehead. Snapping back to reality, she looked to see who it was. It was Naruto.
She looked in his serene sky-colored eyes. In them, she did not see greed or anger. She saw love, truth, and fell in love with him more and more. his eyes were a sea of love and she was drowning with no hope of being rescued. This is love. I feel it in my heart. I wish I could be with you. I wish... These words kept repeating in her mind.
"Hello? Hey! HEY!"
Snapping back, the girl stuttered."Y-Yes?"
"Do you have a fever? You're kinda warm and red..."
THUMP
"Teacher! Hinata fainted again! I think she has a fever. She kept muttering to herself and was really warm."
"Oh dear! Can you carry her to the nurses office?"
"Why does HE get to do it?"
"Yeah, It should totally be me. I mean, can't I get to carry a hot chick?"
The blond ninja was getting pretty annoyed. He picked up her unconscious body and carried out of the room. As he was leaving, the teacher said," Ask for Sakura. She's supposed to be training under Tsunade."
"Okay Teacher. I'm on my way."
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First chapter will talk more later must take bath this will be edited
EDIT: Now I have to go to bed.
EDIT: FINALLY. DONE. Okay. I had this HUGE debate with myself weather to put in honorifics like -chan and -kun and sensei. I feel like I should... Should I? Anyway, I tried not to make it too long or too short. How is it? It's not cute and simple like my other one... This one I like better.Couples will contain: NaruHina, SasuSaku, ShikaTema, NejiTen, and other couples I feel like putting in, so I don't want people to bellyache saying 'That couples stupid'. So, On a scale on 1 to 10, how good? Please be gentle.
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on a scale of 1 to 10? let me think.....

10000000000000000000000000000000000000000!

give or take.=D